Khan, I really enjoyed reading your poem. It is articulate and you have really stricken the right balance in your poem as well as personality in a most pleasing way.
Khan your poem gives deep message. The point is that you have explained both characters of a human being. Now it up to you and all of us to choose the right path. You have balanced it very well
There seems to be something poetic about using your own name as your counter-part, as if you are striving to better yourself and overcome your flaws. The two sides you have portrayed of yourself here surely support the point. Beautifully written.
Khan ! Your poetic work will remain in the history . Your profile picture is looking like you are serving your country as a prime minister excellently and your poem is depicting your flawless character astonishingly.
Khan, I really enjoyed reading your poem. It is articulate and you have really stricken the right balance in your poem as well as personality in a most pleasing way.
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ReplyDeleteKhan your poem gives deep message. The point is that you have explained both characters of a human being.
ReplyDeleteNow it up to you and all of us to choose the right path.
You have balanced it very well
There seems to be something poetic about using your own name as your counter-part, as if you are striving to better yourself and overcome your flaws. The two sides you have portrayed of yourself here surely support the point.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written.
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ReplyDeleteKhan ! Your poetic work will remain in the history . Your profile picture is looking like you are serving your country as a prime minister excellently and your poem is depicting your flawless character astonishingly.
ReplyDeleteWell written Khan...Good job!!
ReplyDeleteGreat job khan! Well defining your personality.
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